Thursday, 18 June 2020

Setting Description By Ethan

LI: 
  • To describe a setting in a story.  
  • The -ing sentence.  
  • Double the last consonant.


As I stared into the booming grey clouds I noticed that my feet Sunk Into the soft sticky mud. Crackling dry leaves underneath Mrs Tennant shoes. The heavy breathing with the person next to me.Thundering sounds coming from the gym. All around me I hear the clicks and clacks of the pens. Deep green and yellow trees. The freshness of the colours makes me feel alive. The brown and maroon bark sits above me.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous24 June 2020 at 09:37

    You have some wonderful descriptive sentences letting me know what it was like for you there. Well done.

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