Wednesday, 13 June 2018

All About Me

Kai ora my name is Ethan and Im 9 years old. Im at waitohu school when I grow up I want to a DOC ranger with my best friend my favourite food sushi.

6 comments:

  1. hi i'm brazil your punctuation is quite well
    but next time get a backround

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  2. hi i`m luka next time make it more spread out. what do you like doing

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  4. do you like fortnite

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